I wrote this, is it good? I wrote it for a poem ignment on why we are who we are. So, yes. Give me feedback?

Woahh, youu go girll.! You speak the truth; you come out with it in a straightforward manner; you just said right there and then what everyone's been wanting to say, but only have been thinking all this time. you were able to sum it up into just one poem. that's pretty awing ..! speechless. what can i say? anyway, um, im an aspiring author/poem-writer and you're amaazing :) take it from mee (;